EP #3

https://youtu.be/lV8NG7B9yWs


During my third elevator pitch I definitely felt the most comfortable compared to the first two. I was suggested to be more energetic and use more emotion during the pitches by my peers. I think this is my best performace.

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  1. Hey Jeffrey,
    I think this is a pretty good elevator pitch. Kudos on having it be exactly one minute. I think that you are definitely being more expressive towards the end of this video. The beginning? Maybe not. It's all about improvement though and I think you've done that. I am also definitely a fan of your app idea. If you could turn this idea into a beautifully designed, user friendly app, then I believe a lot of UF students would want to use it.

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  2. Hey Jeffrey,
    I think this elevator pitch was really good and it seemed like you knew exactly what you were going to say going into it. It was really straightforward which is a good thing because people tend to only listen to the first couple minutes of a presentation. I think that you were able to bring more energy to this pitch than your last one which will help keep people interested.

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