EP #3
https://youtu.be/lV8NG7B9yWs
During my third elevator pitch I definitely felt the most comfortable compared to the first two. I was suggested to be more energetic and use more emotion during the pitches by my peers. I think this is my best performace.
During my third elevator pitch I definitely felt the most comfortable compared to the first two. I was suggested to be more energetic and use more emotion during the pitches by my peers. I think this is my best performace.
Hey Jeffrey,
ReplyDeleteI think this is a pretty good elevator pitch. Kudos on having it be exactly one minute. I think that you are definitely being more expressive towards the end of this video. The beginning? Maybe not. It's all about improvement though and I think you've done that. I am also definitely a fan of your app idea. If you could turn this idea into a beautifully designed, user friendly app, then I believe a lot of UF students would want to use it.
Hey Jeffrey,
ReplyDeleteI think this elevator pitch was really good and it seemed like you knew exactly what you were going to say going into it. It was really straightforward which is a good thing because people tend to only listen to the first couple minutes of a presentation. I think that you were able to bring more energy to this pitch than your last one which will help keep people interested.